Poems Of Longing, Languishing Comments

love, lost, longing, expressed with beautiful imagery.very vivid, touching poem with universal appeal. i think sometime in life we all feel it.10

Your well written verses took me on many journeys back in time - very bitter sweet poem... thanks back at ya! :)

languishing and longing intertwined with beautiful imagery, , , water element is the strongest here showing deep emotion, , , `~10~

The willow forgot to weep. Wounds went to sleep...wonderful images, im feeling homesickness under the curtain of words....though the real home is inside where love lives...10

I always find it difficult To read and write About those pains, from depth of heart. I do believe, to be a true poet One has to keep his inside, out You have done it amazingly. Ohhh.. Pains.. Ohhh If at all i could console? Hummmm...

I feel a sadness in this poem a heart reaching out, a warm heart asking for those winds of change and may they come and when they do blow swet for you, lovely write Rani 10 Chris

this poem is full of emotions that pour out at times abnormally from the depth of heart...and hence it feels looks wet warm and blood red...makes the reader feel too much... sad under tone though a recent best from rani +10

This one divides the mind into two parts, creative and narrative. It flows and ends in solitude....., resourceful and refreshing; I find a kind of sorrow in this poem, wonderfully penned down, incredible..liked it. Rgs Rema