Wednesday, June 19, 2019

Poems: Of Head And Heart Comments

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A poem hatches in the poet's heart,
To recreate which he has to try hard—
Painstakingly brick by brick, part by part,
Head struggles— be it of novice or bard,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 June 2019

This poem relating to head and heart is so incisively and touchingly delineated. I cite...A pure product of heart at last it flows— Waters of rivers to the sea as get, Rising from deepest depth rhythm as grows, If of head, tinker not nor let a let, And lo, the melody that comes to be, Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 June 2019

Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul for the good words. I feel, today's poems are excellent spontaneous expressions of heart, if only some more chiseling is done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 19 June 2019

In poetic heart! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 June 2019

Well, well, well, I see what you mean. You may check for the change I've made and thank you so much dear poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 19 June 2019

This poem about heart straightly touches my heart sir! The words ripple and flow like a river......loved reading it....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 June 2019

Thanks indeed, Dr Swain, your words sure seem to come straight from the heart, I agree, and not from a political etiquette-oriented head.

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