Thursday, May 7, 2009

(poems From Haunted Houses) The House That Once Was A Home Comments

Rating: 5.0

ON THE STAIRS

Thare's a moment when,
hand on dark oak banister,
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Susan Jarvis 25 June 2009

'...a trembling/in the fabric of time' - an admirable line. These adeptly woven images are truly affecting. The 'sudden blaze' reminds me of the first Mrs. Rochester, and I love the humour of 'Coffee Break' - a complete contrast to 'On the Stairs' and 'Bedsitter'. S :)

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