Thursday, July 16, 2009

(poems From Haunted Houses) The Go-Between Comments

Rating: 5.0

Under the stern gaze of the summer moon
my big sister, Juliet to Romeo,
Cathy to her Heathcliff,
slid each night on the porch's sloping roof
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Janice Windle
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Susan Jarvis 24 July 2009

Some wonderful comparisons, 'Juliet to her Romeo', 'Cathy to her Heathcliff'. The thread of doomed love weaves deftly through the lines of this wonderful poem. The wistful, melancholic atmospere of these admirable words; 'Now that romance has flowered, / yielded fruit and withered away' stay with the reader long after the closing line. This is a truly haunting poem - a real privilege to read. S :)

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 16 July 2009

Hello Janice and just a word to commend you on this very passionate and mysterious poem. Great work! Loyd

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