Sunday, August 30, 2015

Poems For Ella (Iii) Comments

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Verse beautiful must
I chant
verses are verses
yet
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Emmanuel George Cefai
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Daniel Brick 13 September 2015

Wow! You don't tell us about Ella's appearance, age, personality traits, her favorite color, the book she reads, etc. those things are the incidentals, your ELLA series aims only one thing: the impact of Ella in your life. On these poems she is the cause if every effect cited, but she herself remains elusive - to the reader, not to you. This poem begins with you singing her praises, it ends with the universe singing them, and in between Ella merely exists, she doesn't have to do anything but BE. And in her being other things have their being and do things. Ella is some kind of ultimate universal Muse.

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Emmanuel George Cefai

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