Poems For Ella (Ii) Comments

Your excitement overflows in this poems and disregards trivial things like grammar. The effect is that everything around you is equally charged by Ella's presence. I can feel it too: this would be an ordinary Sunday, time moving slowly, no pressures, emotions quiescent, but suddenly this electric charge called Ella excites my currents and I'm alert! I can see you want to make her happy to repay her for her gift to you. But the particular images are so quick and clipped I can't address them individually. Suffice it to say even at night there is the light of her presence- those shining eyes!