Thursday, July 30, 2009

Poems And Songs Comments

Rating: 4.7

Before, there was me and you
you composed music
I wrote poem.
Whenever the clouds was gray
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COMMENTS
Full Moon 19 September 2012

a vote for the whisper and the answer.!

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Allemagne Roßmann 19 August 2011

Once were poems and songs.Now they are 2gether as lullabies.Well written.Hats off!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 14 November 2010

i went back to read this because i remember it even when i am about to sleep.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 10 November 2010

what a very nice title, you painted a very nice love story, perfect, until it became a 'once upon a time'. Although it is sad, the poem is greatly written, it speaks of every love story people experience. You painted the scenes with your words, you created the mood in every verse.==you're one great filipino poet, I admire you, i am proud of you.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 28 October 2009

i rated ten here! ......

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Eyan Desir 08 October 2009

They lie love dont always last forever! good write

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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

very touching poem.10

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