Before, there was me and you
you composed music
I wrote poem.
Whenever the clouds was gray
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Once were poems and songs.Now they are 2gether as lullabies.Well written.Hats off!
i went back to read this because i remember it even when i am about to sleep.
what a very nice title, you painted a very nice love story, perfect, until it became a 'once upon a time'. Although it is sad, the poem is greatly written, it speaks of every love story people experience. You painted the scenes with your words, you created the mood in every verse.==you're one great filipino poet, I admire you, i am proud of you.
a vote for the whisper and the answer.!