Poems Comments

i like this one especially the part where is says 'rises from the dead of my mind'

Ah ha, jump in with both feet, atta girl. You have the right idea. But for real, how to do it. Read others poems and it will come to you. Hint: read good poems and good poem will come to you. No harm in trying to compete with the masters. Adeline

that was cute! ! i loved ur name first, haha jk. anyhoo, u rock! ! nice and short and has its own style. ]k loves :)