Sunday, July 20, 2008

Poem With Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

My voice for you is both tender and languid
Disturbs later silence of night dark.
Near bed sad the candle burns mine;
my verses merge murmuring, flow, rivers loves,
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Stanley Jun
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Ashraful Musaddeq 17 September 2008

My 10 in favor of love, in favor of this lovely composition.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 25 July 2008

This poem is wonderful, lyrical with high imagery and mellowed tones. Keep writing. sathya narayana

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 July 2008

I don't know who the poem is for, but it is not for me.The understanding of this poem will require so much time from the reader that it simply won't be worth it. GW62

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Colin Jeffery 21 July 2008

This is a very good poem. Brilliant

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Stanley Jun

Stanley Jun

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