Monday, November 2, 2015
'Poem? What Poem? ' Comments
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I scratched a poem in golden sand-
Some simple words of praise
I thanked the Lord for sunsets and
The skies they set ablaze.
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David Magill
02 November 2015
Interesting to put this content in 8-6 ballad form, but it works. Last two lines inadvertently create an enjambment that trips up the rhyme. But you nailed the whole thing, really. Nice poem.
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7/30/2025 5:23:09 PM # 1.0.0
Delightful write Brian. I love the image of your reclaimed poem being swept away.