Thursday, October 29, 2015

Poem To An Unnameable Man Comments

Rating: 4.3

You have changed me already. I am a fireball
That is hurtling towards the sky to where you are
You can choose not to look up but I am a giant orange ball
That is throwing sparks upon your face
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Dorothea Lasky
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Deluke Muwanigwa 30 September 2023

I meant to give 5 stars but i been away so long could not remember whether 5 stars eist left or right of centre. Never mind. A beautiful poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2023

TOP Marks for you Dorothea dear.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2023

Congratulations dear Poetess being chosen by PoemHunter.and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day. I am very happy for you and I like your poem very much since it is a very honest poem, a methaphorical poem so well expressed

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 September 2023

A powerful poem, very honest and according to the poet's inner heart, and also spoken out, never think that women are weaker than man, but on the other hand I have great pity with the man mentioned here

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 26 October 2022

there is love which crafted 'I was wiser too than you had expected For I knew all along you were mine '- nice to read

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PoetryLover 30 March 2022

Full of duende! ! ! !

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Richard Wlodarski 20 February 2017

You are a fireball! The poem is profound. Full of emotion and mystery. Haunting. Awesome vivid imagery. Deservedly Poem Of The Day. I will definitely be reading more of your poetry!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 February 2017

Shaking! ! You have changed me already. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Salum Bhoki 20 February 2017

technically woven, wonderful selection of words, so emotional and impressive.thanks for sharing

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Tom Allport 20 February 2017

a poem of knowing some thing before some one else knows? and by doing so it changes that persons persona into some thing completely different.

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Bill Cantrell 20 February 2017

Beautifully penned! A wonderful arrangement of emotions with a voice of its own! ! 10++++++++

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 February 2017

I will not cry, although you will expect me to Thanks for sharing. Congrats on modern poet of the Day.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2017

You were mine..... thanks for sharing....

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Sylvaonyema Uba 20 February 2017

I am a fireball. Well written and communicated. Sylva.

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Dorothea Lasky

Dorothea Lasky

St. Louis, Missouri
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