You have changed me already. I am a fireball
That is hurtling towards the sky to where you are
You can choose not to look up but I am a giant orange ball
That is throwing sparks upon your face
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Congratulations dear Poetess being chosen by PoemHunter.and Team as The Modern Poem Of The Day. I am very happy for you and I like your poem very much since it is a very honest poem, a methaphorical poem so well expressed
A powerful poem, very honest and according to the poet's inner heart, and also spoken out, never think that women are weaker than man, but on the other hand I have great pity with the man mentioned here
there is love which crafted 'I was wiser too than you had expected For I knew all along you were mine '- nice to read
You are a fireball! The poem is profound. Full of emotion and mystery. Haunting. Awesome vivid imagery. Deservedly Poem Of The Day. I will definitely be reading more of your poetry!
Shaking! ! You have changed me already. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
technically woven, wonderful selection of words, so emotional and impressive.thanks for sharing
a poem of knowing some thing before some one else knows? and by doing so it changes that persons persona into some thing completely different.
Beautifully penned! A wonderful arrangement of emotions with a voice of its own! ! 10++++++++
I will not cry, although you will expect me to Thanks for sharing. Congrats on modern poet of the Day.
I meant to give 5 stars but i been away so long could not remember whether 5 stars eist left or right of centre. Never mind. A beautiful poem.