Friday, March 31, 2023

Poem On Hope Comments

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The twinkling of stars on a warm night,
The cries of geese as they take flight,
I look passionately in hope towards the sky,
As the firefly flutters with blinkering sight.
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M. Asim Nehal
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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 April 2023

Wonderful Asim Ilove the last line especialy

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May! It is the cruellest month when Sun loses all his mercy and life on earth is at his mercy…

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Juhaina Tumlu 31 March 2023

Tough time don't last but tough people do. You proved it right with this poem.

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Rajan T Renganathan 31 March 2023

Wow And then all of a sudden, the sun rises all the way.

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Rajan T Renganathan 31 March 2023

Sudden twist in last line made this poem very special. I like your style of expression.

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