Poem Of You Comments

I Love this one..so beautiful

secret addiction, imprisoning me with this obscene infliction....................the love epithet beautifully raving over the rain obsequiously obsessive ofcourse onto the obscenity being inflicted upon, quite smooching, well penned, thanks

Lee, This poem was AWE(and might I add) SOME! :) Loved the poem You are truly a talented writer and romantic! On every level you are a 10! Love ya sis! Cecelia

Lovely poemo Lee. Lots of love Roger

Love for another and the contemplation of, so dreamy, Love duncan X

The previous peom and this one remind me so much of me and my writing. have you read my Eulogy? and 'The Door'? I have several more I have not yet submitted, But I will. You spur me on. Friends, Susan xoxo

I'm no expert either, but this poem could be 'set out' a little different, to help it flow in the mind of the reader, as it is read, (i hope you know what i mean) but apart from that my friend, it reads really well, I mean no disrespect as I enjoyed it alot. well done..and keep writing.