Monday, July 8, 2013

Poem Of The Blue Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

My long little life longs for your little love
the unforgetable touch and for the gentle kiss
the meadow of the dusk, and that love of dawn
do you remember my last days when we been together,
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Vishal Sharma
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Heather Wilkins 10 July 2013

a sweet write on love. nicely penned. you know to whom this song belongs

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David Wood 09 July 2013

A lovely poem on love wanting and waiting. Keep writing.

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Neela Nath Das 09 July 2013

Absolutely a heart-warming nice poem Vishal.Keep writing.

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Jenie Franksay 09 July 2013

good write. but i dnt think she has blue eyes. her eyes are black hehehe.

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2013

Still having great grasp in the name of love, you wrote in special way..i guess i know why it get named like this.Keep writing in whatever shape you want, call this as experimental art_Soul

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