I hope it's spring that I'll first see
The naked light of day,
When God may grant me one more life
To wash my sins away.
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your words so full of wisdom and years of brilliance. your work, I feel, will always touch the lives of others and will be remembered as others have been before.
The theme of renewal in spring for a life on earth, and celebrating that with great spiritual awakening, as you grow from a child in all stages is like a new living itself. The simplicity of diction is heartwarming Wolf.10
True worship of the heart. A wondrous prayer of an enlightened soul for good of man and Nirvana for self. CP
Triumphantly bittersweet yet very hopeful! ! ! ! If I could vote you would gotten ten plus many stars! ! ! ! ! ! ! Faith, Hope And Love make the world go around! ! ! !
Love and friendship will surround you whoever who reads this poem as this is a poem of lifetime of yours which is nice in expression!
nice peice brother! very soulful! i like the 6th to 8th stanzas! two thumbs up!
wow... a great poem indeed... The words, the expression, the deep meaning are just awesome... ^-^