Wednesday, September 5, 2012

Poem In The Making Comments

Rating: 4.6

What if we were sainted beings - emmbedded in disguise?
Sent to this celestrial orb; to show our devine prize.
Thus as we go through hustle-flow, a story takes a ride.
These words we speak are flowers, just waiting to unfold.
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Godfrey Morris
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Heather Wilkins 29 November 2012

excellent idea. let us all come together and write about love and peace.

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Louis Rams 29 November 2012

excellent write! a ten

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Anita Sehgal 19 September 2012

music.. for the soul

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Jayde Pene 15 September 2012

i really enjoy this poem because i truly feel for what you have written about and has touched my inner feelings. great poem!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 September 2012

A Good poem. The idea that life is timeless poem and we poets intersect in the Universal poem is commendable.I liked it immensely.Thank you and Best wishes.

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Valerie Dohren 10 September 2012

Love the idea of a universal poem to which we all contribute - nice one Godfrey.

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Godfrey Morris

Godfrey Morris

Kingston, Jamaica
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