Tuesday, June 23, 2009

Poem In My Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is poem in my heart
Unsung tunes, unwritten phrases
The moment I write, the world erases
My philosophy
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Nikunj Sharma
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The poem in your heart has a lovely flow as it writes about your love of writing. From 'The steps I took' (to the end line) 'like the poem in my heart' rounds off your poem so well. Well done! 10 love Karin

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nice poem, good word play

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Nikunj Sharma

Nikunj Sharma

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