Surf cyber net
Browse up high
Click mouse face
Touch Microsoft eye
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Great, great great! my salute to you! imagery and figurative language loaded to your poem! 10/10...more
this is a very hi-tech information bout internet..it starts with clicking, surfing then ends at poemhunter..a very nice poem.. naizz
you have improved a lot being a poet! ! ! ! ..keep on improving my son.....
Right choice of words in the last stanza....great praise on ph