Poem For Thorsten Comments

Beautifully penned transitional conflict between the physical and the spiritual world and great dedication to someone you really love. CP

This is a lovely, heartfelt tribute, dear Marieta. We offer our prayers for The Lord to help you so your beautiful free dreams come true. Good luck! Maria

hmmm, very interesting and well express..

Hi Mari - A truely beutiful poem straight from your lovely Heart. Free verse - free expression - free flow. Very emotive content - it all adds up to a TEN. Whatever age we are we all crave Freedom. Freedom from FEAR - for and from our PAIN and (above all else) for LOVE. I have learned that the World is full of WALLS (visible & invisible) . Walls to keep us IN and walls to keep us OUT - and many many 'Walls of broken Dreams' (this line alone is worth a TEN) . What is a 'Real last Dance'? A dance to say HELLO? A dance to say GOODBYE? A dance frozen in TIME? Please save the last dance for me - Mari We often feel in a relationship that GOD is happy with us and really wants us to be togther (however incongruous) - but forced apart by HUMAN displeasure - WHY? In TIME God does change all things - but alas 'For this LOVE' the timescale was inappropriate 'The world did change' but much to slowly - FOR THIS LOVE. Thanks for sharing Mari it has made us all think about our own 'Broken Dreams'. Love you in Poetry - SOUL BROTHER JOHN..

that The Lord Will change the world For this love........................ love true as resolute of unshakable faith yet when intense that happens to happen.......loving heart yet breaks all the walls around the universe, most passionate write by ingenuity as expressed in metaphors and imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

you've penned this with beauty coz the theme lovely. thanks for sharing this poem to me.

A beauty of love. Deep thoughts of write Lord is always there for you Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me 10+

a deep sentiments of love...splendid thoughts writte nicely......10

The Lord Will change the world For this love... yes, the Lord within you. Thanks, Mari. Liked it very much.