Her life with him was a true and terrible
continuation of sad illusions, waiting to
spit out all his amazing love spiral and
much more, waiting to imprint his frozen
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Your message in the poem outweighs the poetry that could possibly be, still it is very good poetry.
this reflects the life of many women in the Third World Countries........actual situation filled with feelings
You put your pen to paper and have pleasured us with a most powerful write. You have giving voice to many many women around the globe.