Poem For A Poem Comments

And this is a poem indeed, Nicely written....

This is still my favorite of all your poems. I hope you are well and still writing, if not on poemhunter, then somewhere. I do not post on poemhunter anymore, but visit occasionally., check yours.

naseer, i relate to this poem- especially the first stanza. many times i have walked a gallery and noted the beauty of the women and children present surpassed the art displayed. thank you for sharing it. and thanks also to samina and lillian for their help. it is wise of you to enlist it- even as my first and only fluent language, english is a challenge to mastery. a fellow poet, glen kappy

Anything that enthuse sentimental thoughts and emotions expressed in meaningful phrases are poems, they are innate and instinctive. Well-penned!

beautiful sketches that evolve poetry. nice imagination. about write i hv nothing to say bcoz you are self a man of letter but the imagination are rare a gift of god.i cordially invite you to read my poems n comment. regards always.

I have nothing to say but it's beautiful.....very beautiful poem

A facsimile or mirror image of What a Poem is? Brilliant write…thanks… 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

i agree with you the canvas of poetry is vast.....we need to focus our art on world problems in our forums to illuminate awareness......and you write very well for this purpose

Love it. Not just one poem but two score.

cool poem so interesting love it

Hi Naseer, your mind is a beautiful poem, indeed.

love this...but would love to hear the original rendered in Urdu...that would be paradise on Earth!

wow wow wow! ! ! what a beautiful and mesmerizing piece. Completely fallen in love with. The ending was really awesome.It became part of short favorite poems list. Many 10s or this write.

i was in awww! that was just beautiful. Our world our space and time are reflections of our poems Our lives Lee it was a super 10+++++++++++++

Very good poem, you tell good things!

You are right! There lies poetry in mundane things of life! It is for the Poet with his magic of words - to raise it to great heights! You may like my poem on page no.2, titled -'Harlem Night'! 10! - Raj Nandy.

lovely sir...there is a poem everywhere for a poet and you have beautifully told that...10

Nasir Saahab, A great poet you are! ! ! What else can I say?

kya likhoon kya na likhoon mein, asif iss Kudrat ke karismay ko jo kalam ki sehayee bun gayee..... another marvelous composition from you sir, thanks many 10'ssssssss rgds asif

very great poem..i enjoyed reading it..,