Sunday, October 31, 2010

Poem Fever Comments

Rating: 4.8

I feel sick-the feeling one feels when he has a fever
The same anxiety, ill-mood, and very sober
I feel numb-as the fever triggers inch by inch
Making me worried, I need a pinch
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Naida Nepascua Supnet
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Denis Mair 08 October 2024

I am glad to hear of your poem fever. As it goes deeper into the marrow, readers like me will be the beneficiaries.

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Reza Raza 08 October 2024

A1

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Bri Edwards 08 October 2024

Naida, With this: 'Like ice cream and cake you're irresistible' you are REALLY talking 'my language', Where IS that cake and ice cream! ! ! ***** ;) bri

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Chinedu Dike 28 September 2019

Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Naida.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 August 2019

I simply love this poem, dear ate Naida....

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 April 2016

Words fall like rain! Nice work.

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A creative and captivating composition. Well done!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 October 2014

So I close my eyes and words fall like rain. Excellent imagination on poem and poet's thought. Very nicely scripted and honoured.

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Savita Tyagi 21 September 2014

Wonderful poem. The way poem writing stays in mind of poets is known but the way you expressed it is just amazing. Enjoyed it very much. full 10.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 21 September 2014

The poet here makes the mental efforts of a poet in such clear vision and wonderful it is. A beautiful poem.

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Kim Barney 21 September 2014

Great poem. I feel the same way when the urge to write hits.

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I feel like this when the Muse grabs me for another round of co-operative inspiration...great spin on poetry..a ten

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 September 2014

The thing inseparable lovely poem and PH and its member know soul and body inseparable if separated decays

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Khairul Ahsan 22 September 2013

An excellent poem, Naida! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, so 10/10! I think all poets suffer from this kind of fever. Some periodically, some perennially! And heartiest congratulations for its being selected as the 'Member Poem'!

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 September 2013

straight from heart its beautiful ink.liked it.

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Liliana ~el 21 September 2013

Beautiful gorgeous perfect embodiment of our processes! ! ! : D

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Sandra Feldman 21 September 2013

Who would think that there was a good fever. That could be in life, it's most important lever Very well written, enjoyed.

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Jayne Davies 21 September 2013

Great poem! Well done!

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Akanksha Bhatt 23 September 2012

very nice poem! ! ! ! i also feels the POEM FEVER! !

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Bolah Lawal 21 September 2012

Yeah, very true.....absolutely rhythmic!

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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