I feel sick-the feeling one feels when he has a fever
The same anxiety, ill-mood, and very sober
I feel numb-as the fever triggers inch by inch
Making me worried, I need a pinch
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Naida, With this: 'Like ice cream and cake you're irresistible' you are REALLY talking 'my language', Where IS that cake and ice cream! ! ! ***** ;) bri
Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing, Naida.
A creative and captivating composition. Well done!
So I close my eyes and words fall like rain. Excellent imagination on poem and poet's thought. Very nicely scripted and honoured.
Wonderful poem. The way poem writing stays in mind of poets is known but the way you expressed it is just amazing. Enjoyed it very much. full 10.
The poet here makes the mental efforts of a poet in such clear vision and wonderful it is. A beautiful poem.
I feel like this when the Muse grabs me for another round of co-operative inspiration...great spin on poetry..a ten
The thing inseparable lovely poem and PH and its member know soul and body inseparable if separated decays
An excellent poem, Naida! Thoroughly enjoyed reading it, so 10/10! I think all poets suffer from this kind of fever. Some periodically, some perennially! And heartiest congratulations for its being selected as the 'Member Poem'!
Beautiful gorgeous perfect embodiment of our processes! ! ! : D
Who would think that there was a good fever. That could be in life, it's most important lever Very well written, enjoyed.
I am glad to hear of your poem fever. As it goes deeper into the marrow, readers like me will be the beneficiaries.