Poem Discovered On Cave Wall Comments
I made the wheel
You rolled your eyes
I saw the truth
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SO, I guess this stuff has been going on for a long time now, eh? :) Where's the loss? The hands? I can see there's much love in that cave....
I considered this ending for a long time: I captured fire, but burned my hands Is it better? from a woman's perspective? Changes the meaning quite a bit...
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7/23/2025 9:42:28 PM # 1.0.0
Loss, love, and maybe a bit of regret somewhere in four parts of two lines and a single sentence.. Technically a brilliant poem Brian.. Thanks for sharing..