Tuesday, February 20, 2018

Poem Composed Of Tune Titles Comments

Rating: 5.0

On one spring day of the Partridge Sky
I saw a Pair of Sparrows flying high.
Gentle breeze spread the Willow Branch Song
So sweet and tender, as is any Southern Song.
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Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

Anybody will admit That it is a lovely poem. Amusing expression. Fine penmanship. Wisely articulated. I appreciate this poem. Full vote. Thanks.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 April 2018

What a lovely poem Perdita. Your love for nature is evident. Metahors and similies flow out of your pen with such ease and grace. I loved the poem Perdita, God bless.10++++++

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Perdita Young 17 April 2018

Thank you for your time and comment, dear Geeta. Much encouraged.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 April 2018

To express Everlasting Longing for her! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2018

Loved the music reflected in you poem! ....Beautiful Lady Yu was playing music to Polaris, She Playing Flute Recalled on Phoenix Terrace. A Slow, Slow Tune, with slight tint of sentiment, To express Everlasting Longing for her beloved distant......Very elegant expression! .....10

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