Wednesday, April 29, 2015

Poem About The Shanty Of A Woman- Labor Set On Fire By The Land Mafia Comments

Rating: 4.0

My heart aches as the Sun gallops away slowly to his abode,
Smoke in shape of a human body ascends from a distant road.
A woman hiding her face below her palms, cries near her node.
She labored, she made the building, she worked for the high rise.
...
Read full text

Lajpat Chawla
COMMENTS
Bharati Nayak 20 October 2018

So pathetic a story - - - -the story repeats- - You have painted the picture so poignantly - -Let me quote- - - The smoke converts to clouds and gathers in my burning eyes, The tears flow, as a poem trembles on my lips, with silent cries. The judge and the jury on earth may not do to him any harm, The devil who triggered the fire has such a big arm. The weeping damsel, I know, the story in another form will repeat They will stay where they are and you will have to retreat.

0 0 Reply
Lajpat Chawla

Lajpat Chawla

mumbai
Close
Error Success