Poem About Poetry - Adam's First Poem After The Fall Comments

An intriguing and interesting write; nice job!

Very nice, John. I read it because the title intrigued me and was not disappointed. However, I would encourage you to delet the explanation. I believe a poem should stand by itself and should not have to be explained. Your poem does stand by itself, whether every reader 'gets it' or not. Raynette

Very compelling and intense.

Very different from you other poem that I read I loved the idea and I felt its very creative in its concept...