Poetry, what a unique beast of heart!
Proxy words, nor surrogates to replace,
Seamless when they fit with whole work of art,
Wilt one and wound her weary soul, her grace,
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this so interesting line-Poetry, what a unique beast of heart! / Poetry- beast of HEART! /// enjoyed I your poem // O' Poetry you're beauty of heart even you are ebony, truly I said, no flirt......///
Thank you Mahtab. This poem of mine was there on PH for nearly five years, Today I gave it a rebirth and you noticed it first.
A poem is a touch-me-not beast. Avoid tinkering unnecessarily, - - - - I agree with you! When I edit a poem, it seems I take its driving throbbing heart away. Sometimes smooth is just another term for flat. Well done discussion of the perils of tinkering.
Thank you Susan Williams