Monday, July 31, 2006
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You award these muses with a letter
And you submit to every listener’s ear
A special melody for their wisdom.
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7/31/2025 3:54:46 AM # 1.0.0
This is a lovely piece Masiela it flows well and maintains the narrative without a fall. The structure provides a good pace to this. I have a problem with the last line though. I feel it comes over as a thought on how to bring closure to the piece. I feel that you should cut it and leave the poem end on 'Slowly and deliberately' which I think makes for a fine ending.