Poem 2 Comments

Deconstruction...Smell of post modern tragedies...nice

I hope to read more of you poet! I like your poem's last line. if your mean is comb...

The moving lines with great words and meanings really a well done job...but i hope you will rename all your poems instead of poem 1, poem 2...as it needs name to be remembered_SOul

wonderful subject.brilliant idea.already agree with this marvelous piece of art.with nice prose and flowing lines. best wishes~nb

stunned..... allusion on heckle n mane is fantastic apparently seems light but is grave in nature a much mature Art hard to rephrase for our shallow wit better add some lines in poet note:

Somewhat dark poem but I like it