HIS mouth twiched,
his body turned to
crimson blue.
BEHIND this mask
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david i realize this is your way of dealing with issues and i'm impressed with your title do you think it will help you long term, your poem does not deserve a low mark for it takes away from your hard work, so i will give you an eight for effort Warm regards allan
FOR A DEAR FRIEND...........if theres a way in, then theres a way out...
Very intense poem David. Sincerely, Mary