Saturday, October 22, 2005

Pockets Of Anger, Comments

Rating: 3.4

HIS mouth twiched,
his body turned to
crimson blue.
BEHIND this mask
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Mary Nagy 24 October 2005

Very intense poem David. Sincerely, Mary

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Allan James Saywell 22 October 2005

david i realize this is your way of dealing with issues and i'm impressed with your title do you think it will help you long term, your poem does not deserve a low mark for it takes away from your hard work, so i will give you an eight for effort Warm regards allan

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David Gerardino 22 October 2005

FOR A DEAR FRIEND...........if theres a way in, then theres a way out...

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