a lagoon of shimmering atmosphere
from above waterfall, come near
a parcel from storm bringer
just embellish wayfarer
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awww thnks for the poem u wrote for me i appreciate it i luv it 11+ wow is was fanastic
a well written poem for a friend, cosmic piece...though pluto is no longer counted as a planet as of today....10
my few acclaiming words cannot express my fancy to this poem.....come on! ! show us more! ! !
A poem with a nice, inspiring idea. Yes, we require role models to follow in our life. Role models are required for certain value systems. Values are getting personified through such role models. We require values in our life. Look around us and we can find values and virtures practically in everything.
The only problem I have with this is the title. The title must, in my view, bear directly on the body of the poem. It must give direct reference to the message of that poem. Here, it does no such thing. Other than that, I found this piece to be beautifully written. GW62
Fantastic heart felt piece, keep that golden ink flowing my friend, beautiful work
Fantastic heart felt piece, keep that golden ink flowing my friend, beautiful work
A HEAVENLY MUSIC TO MY EARS A PLEASURE TO READ FOR MY EYES, ALWAYS INSPIRED, ALWAYS GOOD.
Good chanting of eminent persons over here alongside backtracking a message for the upcoming society.A heart felt poem.10++
Yes I will just dance to the music of the breaking surf under the milky way in all its splendour. Brilliant I love it.+10
Ahmad well done bro, its a good piece