Friday, April 24, 2009

Plunge Into Pluto Comments

Rating: 5.0

a lagoon of shimmering atmosphere
from above waterfall, come near
a parcel from storm bringer
just embellish wayfarer
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Brian Jani 24 May 2014

Ahmad well done bro, its a good piece

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Christina Phan 11 May 2009

awww thnks for the poem u wrote for me i appreciate it i luv it 11+ wow is was fanastic

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Ted Sheridan 07 May 2009

Congratulations on a wonderful poem.

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Catrina Heart 02 May 2009

a well written poem for a friend, cosmic piece...though pluto is no longer counted as a planet as of today....10

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T S 01 May 2009

An extremely Beautiful piece of poetry.... a well deserved 10 plus

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Chitra - 30 April 2009

a cosmic write...dazzling all throughout

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<font color =fusha>Amy 30 April 2009

this is amazing nice write

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Chad Robinson 29 April 2009

very nice indeed........................10

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Omar Ibrahim 27 April 2009

my few acclaiming words cannot express my fancy to this poem.....come on! ! show us more! ! !

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Seema Chowdhury 27 April 2009

a nice poem for a friend.

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Lynda Robson 26 April 2009

Good write for a fellow poet, thanks Ahmad 10 Lynda xx

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Ravi A 26 April 2009

A poem with a nice, inspiring idea. Yes, we require role models to follow in our life. Role models are required for certain value systems. Values are getting personified through such role models. We require values in our life. Look around us and we can find values and virtures practically in everything.

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C. P. Sharma 25 April 2009

a true homage to the noble souls. CP

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 April 2009

The only problem I have with this is the title. The title must, in my view, bear directly on the body of the poem. It must give direct reference to the message of that poem. Here, it does no such thing. Other than that, I found this piece to be beautifully written. GW62

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quite a beautifully expressed piece.

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~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2009

Fantastic heart felt piece, keep that golden ink flowing my friend, beautiful work

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~ Jon London ~ 25 April 2009

Fantastic heart felt piece, keep that golden ink flowing my friend, beautiful work

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Juan Carlos Abeti 25 April 2009

A HEAVENLY MUSIC TO MY EARS A PLEASURE TO READ FOR MY EYES, ALWAYS INSPIRED, ALWAYS GOOD.

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Allemagne Roßmann 25 April 2009

Good chanting of eminent persons over here alongside backtracking a message for the upcoming society.A heart felt poem.10++

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Anthony Foster 25 April 2009

Yes I will just dance to the music of the breaking surf under the milky way in all its splendour. Brilliant I love it.+10

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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