after the rainfall
treetops weep dusk's purple tears
goodbye to golden
some days should last forever
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You are just fantastic in connecting every emotion yo mother nature. some days should last forever because they were that perfect.... indeed this is true.
Thank you for letting me know how much you liked this. It's so inspiring.
Beautiful poem. The beauty lies in the way you have created the essential mood of love, by efflorescent expressions on nature.... and concluding that " some days should last forever /because they were that perfect".5 stars and onto my fav"
I am very honored to have a poem among your favorites. Thank you for your nice remarks, and for letting me know how much you liked this poem.
And ending so mesmerizing. and later I found my love in the evening's plum shadows...just beautiful.
Thank you very much. That is so nice to hear.