Sunday, September 16, 2018

Pluck A Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wherefrom he comes whereto he goes
I have seen him, he is distincly visible
colors dance and his aroma sings a ghazal
a light that fills moon and the stars
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalida Bano Ali 09 November 2018

An amazing poem.....................................

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 September 2018

kullu shai-in yar-jio ilaa aslihi................

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2018

I AGAIN RATED IT AS A 10 ++++++++++++++++++++POEM COVERS THE BEAUTY OF LORDS EXISTENCE PERSONIFIED as in nature since eras trillions years and time were invented only years since few ages when man learned the gong around of the sun about our earth then converted the thought ias e do in a mirror sun is static as much as is our LORD we all go about enjoying and sharing energy in forms called Darshan or obeyance bow we all to the LORD SUN

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 September 2018

Only he lives who is alive in love its you LORD YOU ARE THE POETIC LORD Who has won all hearts MY LORD thou art a realistic love R thou

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Nadia Umber Lodhi 16 September 2018

Very nice and beautiful 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Kelly Kurt 16 September 2018

From stars we came, to stars we will eventually return.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 September 2018

A marvelous poem. It brings out the beauty and wonders of nature. Yes, we are bound by nature. The universe is our image and it stays in our heart. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10+++××

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

Yes, we see those colours are dancing with fragrance. He is full of light moon stars His message is love and loving attitude. Wonderful poem is really very brilliantly penned. Flowers always motivate mind. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.Cycle of expression is wonderfully organized.10

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