Monday, August 10, 2009

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'Veiled' in hypocrisy...
Deviating...
Sleazy blends
Propagate devious,
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Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.
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Jonas Kildare 18 August 2009

Indeed, economic life has become for too many absolutized - the market being the subject of idolatry. Yet, only divine truths are workable and perfectly logical. Life without them is insane, illogical and unworkable. As always a great piece of work with artistic and intellectual originality. Thank you Dr. Kardas and God bless... Prof. Jonas

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Peter Laskin 17 August 2009

Dr.Kardas, Great satire with wit and thoughtful ideas and words... deep spiritual content and questioning especially in the last 2 stanzas. Great intellectual stimulants! ! ! 10! ! !

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Texan Cowboy 12 August 2009

Finally, some sensible writing I can relate to! Thought I'd have to be hog-tied to sit through and read an entire poem...but this is the very first time I found every line so in-tuned with my own thinking...though little ol' me could never come up with the fancy phrases, you managed to 'pick my brain' and write it down for me. Thanks Doc! You must be a great shrink with even greater faith. God love y'all.

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Paul Richardson Sr. 12 August 2009

Dr. Kardas, what a zesty tone and phrases spiced with profound jewels of wisdom as: man 'gravely stained savors no enduring gain' etc. Thank you for this memorable and motivating masterwork! Hats off to you!

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Tom Beckhart 12 August 2009

Is there anthing worse than fools being fooled by a greater fool (or fools) ? Your sharp intellect shines through! Thanks again Doc! I am e-mailing this to my buddies.

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Eagle Eye 12 August 2009

My friends wanted to comment on this powerful work but they are not members on this site so they selected me to leave our collective comment. Here I go: properly bold and truthful analysis of human stupidity! . Be careful how you define heroes! ! ! Thank you Doc and God bless America!

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Jay Pappalardo 12 August 2009

There are indeed green and naive fans who would support such scary figures knowing their stands on the HORROR of ABORTION and other VITAL social, political and foreign affairs and issues! ! ! Now insanity reigns and we the people must put a STOP to it! ! ! Great work DR.10! ! !

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Jeremiah Bodine 12 August 2009

My family, friends and I wish to congratulate you on an outstanding piece of satirical work! Enjoyed every word of it! Thank you Dr. and God bless...10! ! !

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Allison Freeman 12 August 2009

Dear Dr. Kardas, You are an absolute wizard with words... never disappointing the readers with vast illuminating insights as 'concealing fault is submitting to its ugly default' etc. GREAT political satire and so appropriate at this time! 10++++++

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Henery Stillian 11 August 2009

I absolutely agree with you, Dr. K that there are evils and things in the world that can deform us, discourage us and even gradually destroy our souls. We need to despise them and confront them head on! Superb work as always! I am sure I will return to re-read this one many times.10+++++

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Reggis Fenagalo 10 August 2009

Dr. Kardas, What can my meager words say...I love it all! From the Title to the ending a riveting political thriller! Especially love the last line for only God can perfectly despise [let's not forget, there is a HELL for those who choose to be there]. Appreciate the 'warning voice'! Reggis & family 10!

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Suyatha Kemm 10 August 2009

Yes, our dear Warrior friend, you have stabbed the heart of political injustice with mighty blows of the pen. Very wise choice of words.10+++

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Eagle Eye 10 August 2009

Wow! Your language and ideas are simply brilliant and to the point! There are not strong enough words to describe the political MESS we're all in. Yet, your poem manages to punch out the heart of the matter superbly. Terrific! 10+++++++

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WATER LIILIE 10 August 2009

A masterpiece of line after line of brilliant commentary on the sad state of political affairs around the world! Unique style of condensing into powerful phrases, many ideas that take the mind on a journey of emotions. Just loved it!

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Max Steiner 10 August 2009

Doc This is absolutely the best political satire I've ever read! ! ! You have outdone yourself! So much wisdom cleverly put! I am still laughing at some of the phrases and descriptions. Doc you are truly a genius! 10! ! !

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James Mcmahon 10 August 2009

your poem is a lyrical melody speaking in Sense and nonsense, its great without being anything at all? saying nothing to noone, and all at someone? quite condemming but I like it x

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Dale Barnes 10 August 2009

Loved this. What is there to life without words? Bravo

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