Saturday, December 31, 2011

Plight Of My Flight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Flew through life holding to all that i can.
Counting the days all remaining are on one hand.
Lost is the dream what should have been.
Gone is the chance to suceede or win.
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jack green
COMMENTS
Dave Walker 01 January 2012

A great poem, i really like this. A good write.

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Sarah Hardin 31 December 2011

A deep sadness, the longing of what will never be. A beautifully express poem. A pleasure to read.

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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

Excellent poem! ! ! I like this one, I breathe this feeling! ! !

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