Pledge Comments

great poem.interesting to read. anjandev roy.

Common man! Nice work.

It was through relentless suffering and sacrifice that our forefathers won for us freedom! But the new generation hardly realizes the value of this hard earned freedom! They toy with freedom and corruption and nepotism, violence and racism have greatly marred the freedom of our land! Let us pledge ourselves that we shall do all that is within our power to safeguard the freedom of our country! A very patriotic write!

we feel sorry as it has proved illusory no freedom in real sense only corruption exists on face

We pledge oh motherland on this Valentine Day To regain true freedom, for you, in noble way.- - -so nicely envisioned. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing. - - - 10

Verily, a great pledge as freedom of common man is the true freedom........10

For common man freedom has become illusory Its fruits were reaped, though, by few coteries Governed by selfishness and inhuman qualities Who are ruled by even the setanic mentalities. So very true. We have convieniently forgotten the past where so many sacrificed their lives and energy to attain our freedom. Now the politics has become so bad that your words catch meaning at once when we read your poem. thank you . tony

Freedom struggles that fought with sacrifices are part of histories. A good poem and likes.

Fantastic! A pledge for the country

wonderful poem with a great social meaning! bravo!

A good pledge for motherland. We can regain the true freedom when we are wholly conscious.