Saturday, December 21, 2019

Pleasures And Pains Prove God Comments

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I hate this life, hate this world, and, hate the solar system,
I hate this galaxy; hate all other galaxies, and their equilibrium,
I hate the time; hate the space, having no beginning and no end.
I love the black holes, cruel and lawless without a positive trend,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 22 December 2019

Wow! Outstanding write with stunning imagery and inspired lines! You might like to read my new poem ' Beginning Of The World'

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2019

beautiful you have spoken the WHOLE TRUTH GOD had ordained you JA SIR to poemise it so Dear actors here I am and I have written this screen play. It's me sweetheart, who has made this sexy doll of clay. If there would not be this amazing pleasure of, I would have said, " There is neither a God nor an apex." 111111100000000000000000000000000000000++++++++++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 December 2019

Delicate flowers inviting butterflies to the branches of trees, For cross pollination ending in fruits and crops, and bees Sweetness of honey collected in the chambers of wax, A pleasure of is everywhere to enjoy and relax, Even though you are SPIRITUALIST in the four lines above you have outlined the whole purpose of life so succinctly Congrats sir This poetry is toooo long for me

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 December 2019

An excellent write sir! Appreciated the thought contents. Thanks for sharing..........10

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yoonoos peerbocus 22 December 2019

Right -they make you feel the intensity in your whole being

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