Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Pleasure And Pains Comments

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I desired pleasure and it I got,
But with the pleasure pains I brought,
I desired love and it I got,
But with the love hates I brought.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 August 2018

And I am now pained as I am missing your umbrella of sheltering me from rain why only pain

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Kelly Kurt 01 August 2018

Some days I believe courage is all that gets me through pains. Wonderfully written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 August 2018

Akhtar, such an inspiring poem...10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 August 2018

Pleasure we get remains for short period and sometimes pleasure turns into pain. This amazes mind very often. With love hate is brought. This provokes thought. But love allows us to tolerate every pain we get. Love gives unlimited courage to lead life breaking many obstacles. A nice message is transferred. An excellent poem is penned...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 August 2018

A wonderful poem that vividly depicts realities of life with meaningful message. The last.stanza conveys the power of love.. Absolutely true, love gives us a.lot of courage.10+++++

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Rajnish Manga 31 July 2018

Bitter-sweet truths of life which we come across through our pains and pleasures nicely captured in this poem. The best part is 'It's love that gives me a lot of courage! ' Thanks for sharing.

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