Pleasure And Pain Comments

I like this alot. Although? Do you mean membrane? I do not have my dictionary in my room, so I cannot look it up for correct spelling. Membrane? Like a thin skin seperating something? Sorry. I have had to edit my work for years before it goes to print from the publishers. I see a word that might not be spelled correctly and I am addicted to fixing it. Hope you don't mind. DC

its a real good poem...your a real good poet..amazing words

Between the pleasure and pain There is thin memberane Easy to pierce, difficult to spot Once demolished, helps a lot. i like this last stanza good write--- anjali