Cool was the night but hot from inside
Clouds whispered to the wind
I will come to you as rain
Night snuggled close to the breeze
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Night snuggled close to the breeze drenched by rain, ............ Wow! ! ! ! ! so romantic and cute poem, thanks for sharing, ++++++ 10
A beautifully crafted metaphoric write. Love is intensified by nature. Great piece.10
I too will freeze and be frozen like snowy trees and you leave all on the far banks of the river all alone and all wish to go along with you alone where is the mirror of thine where in I can find a face like mine You are a speedier poet all know leaving us on the river banks on the opposite side none can with out your help survive and it's no surmise tis the losers enterprise
I find intense love between cloud and wind! Lovely poem Rini!
This is a very creative and thought invoking poem. It has a lot of food for thought. I have already enjoyed reading it several times.
A nice imagery, very well penned......................................................
Thank you so much Akhtar ji..