Thursday, December 28, 2017

Pleasure Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cool was the night but hot from inside
Clouds whispered to the wind
I will come to you as rain
Night snuggled close to the breeze
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Rini Shibu
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Akhtar Jawad 30 December 2017

A nice imagery, very well penned......................................................

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Rini Shibu 30 December 2017

Thank you so much Akhtar ji..

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Muzahidul Reza 29 December 2017

Night snuggled close to the breeze drenched by rain, ............ Wow! ! ! ! ! so romantic and cute poem, thanks for sharing, ++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks Reza for your visit Rini

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2017

A beautifully crafted metaphoric write. Love is intensified by nature. Great piece.10

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks Rose for posting your remarks Rini

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 December 2017

I too will freeze and be frozen like snowy trees and you leave all on the far banks of the river all alone and all wish to go along with you alone where is the mirror of thine where in I can find a face like mine You are a speedier poet all know leaving us on the river banks on the opposite side none can with out your help survive and it's no surmise tis the losers enterprise

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Rini Shibu 29 December 2017

Thanks for your wonderful comment dear poet

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 December 2017

I find intense love between cloud and wind! Lovely poem Rini!

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Rini Shibu 28 December 2017

Thanks Dillip..

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Lamar Cole 28 December 2017

This is a very creative and thought invoking poem. It has a lot of food for thought. I have already enjoyed reading it several times.

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Rini Shibu 28 December 2017

Thanks Lamar....

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