Friday, September 5, 2014

Pleasing Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Taking her hand, leading her
Laying down with her
Undressing and caressing
Looking at her, she blushes
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MacGregor Tagliaferro
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Chinedu Dike 25 September 2014

You're good. You captured the intimacy of the moment beautifully. Another addition to my favourite list. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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