Sunday, October 28, 2012

Pleased Are We When It Pours Comments

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The massive clouds their white petals shed
And wombs of heaven get impregnated;
The maid, eyes black and mascara applied,
Clad in black, by rain gods is espied
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 February 2019

Two brownish nipples in heaven On the bosom of a woman, Pregnant with possibilities rife, And dripping elixir of life Pours on the lips parched and in strife, let it rain in parched lands. again wonderful examples. your mind is very very imaginative. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 February 2019

Thank you, but you have the ability to dig out the gems you look for. A good poet always finds good poetry. Perhaps in ordinary or in so-so pens he finds the extra-ordinary.

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