Saturday, August 11, 2007

Please Walk Away Comments

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You’ve had the safety of my heart for far too long
The time has come where we go it on our own
Find your own path
Let your heart find a new home.
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Stug Jordan 16 August 2007

This is full of feeling and brave, showing others (really, strangers) the inner working of your heart and love. A poem, I think, written as much for yourself as for its subject. S x

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Original Unknown Girl 13 August 2007

What a heartfelt plea, I feel the pain when you wrote this but you penned it beautifully and strongly too. I hope you get some reprieve and your heart gets time to heal, a way forward whatever that may be. HG: -) xx

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Dennis Walker 12 August 2007

That is a strong poem I like it, again you put your heart down on paper your words tell the strugel you fight with your heart and your mind lovely poem Did he walk away? ? was you strong? ?

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