Wake me up
When dawn descends down on the dales
The crow shakes its wings in its nest
The wells reverberates with sounds of pails
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This is lovely Tiku! This is the same sentiment I have expressed in my poem Give Me. We long for the country side, may be because, we have had the bliss of growing up in a serene locale abounding in Nature's plenty! I give you a 10
Ah! Loved the style of write and really, we must be conscious of the beauty of nature. wake me up - - - the title denotes the double meaning of the poem.
The body, mind and soul want to wake up to the serene beauties of nature.Words flow like like a singing spring.