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Nice Aldo, and yes, he is perhaps the one person that you can always trust even thought we don't always feel it, he has our backs and our well being in his hands., marci...[am away have had no time since last sunday to read or write. At daughters in Illinois.]

Is this poem incomplete or meant to sound incomplete? Its sounds like you wanted to write a poem today but you had to force yourself, its sounds as if you had writers block today. you should never force a poem my dear. You are better than that. Am i right? I love your poems though you have wonderful style.