Monday, October 3, 2011

Please Take This Blanket From Me Comments

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Please take this blanket from me
For I'm young and you are old,
And wrap yourself within it
To protect you from the cold,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Brian Jani 27 June 2014

Nice poem you expressed the spirit of giving perfectly

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Smoky Hoss 03 November 2011

Excellent; the plight of poverty personified. Wonderful poem.

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Allemagne Roßmann 08 October 2011

A friend in need afterall.Splendid write and astonishing skills in poetry approved.

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Tsira Gogeshvili 05 October 2011

Hi Andrew, The poem is so remarkable... Only... you do not speak her that she is already old and chilly... :) Tsira

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