Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Please Stop Loving Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

You said you love me,
But how on earth can it be?
When you are not free,
As you are married, you see!
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Gi Galen 01 July 2008

Moral cross-road and lyrical nuances … is beautiful...10!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 29 June 2008

Fine expression indeed that holds certain love...well done

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Jurietta Duraan 18 June 2008

I like it... I can almost see the ragatsa voicing the speech with passion and feeling.... excellent

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Lynda Robson 18 June 2008

A poem full of feeling Marvin, it's a shame when love is not reciprocated, but life is not always so uncomplicated, well penned, Lynda xx

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Onelia Avelar 18 June 2008

Unfortunatelly, we often cannot order what or who to love - lovers are not on a wine-list. Well penned, very emotional

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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