Friday, June 5, 2009

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I can hardly see you for all the tubes and monitors they’ve attached you to my little one.
You look so frail and poorly.
Oh how I wish I could hold you – but I can’t.
Just hang in there, be strong for Daddy.
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Alice Anne Gordon
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Jacqui Thewless 02 October 2010

- there's nothing worse. Bless you. x

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Leonard Daranjo 06 June 2009

Very touching. Exceedingly well written Alice. Well wrapped up in the last stanza. Leonard

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