Thursday, December 19, 2013

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Thought I'd be done with moving on
But moving on just doesn't work that way

Can't be crushing on someone so hard
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Liliana EL.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 December 2013

Ah aw i see. But first lets assess it as a poem. I say it is a splendid poem with a superb rhyme scheme. Now contentwise U r right it isnt easy as pie to jus move on and transfer feelings. Great job!

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