Ah aw i see. But first lets assess it as a poem. I say it is a splendid poem with a superb rhyme scheme. Now contentwise U r right it isnt easy as pie to jus move on and transfer feelings. Great job!
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Ah aw i see. But first lets assess it as a poem. I say it is a splendid poem with a superb rhyme scheme. Now contentwise U r right it isnt easy as pie to jus move on and transfer feelings. Great job!