Saturday, March 7, 2020

Please Show Concern Comments

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Please put your hand on my heart show concern
My love I am in dire need of touch of yours to say
I am in need of your attention so please do discern
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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2020

Take me don't break me help me remain composed/You are the only hope in this world of cruel rivals....I trace.fathomless poetic depth in this lovely poetic expression! What a great urge! Beautifully put.....10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 March 2020

A brilliant poem on Love has been amazingly shared with thrilling expression. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thank you dear Col for sharing this beautiful poem with us.10

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Abbottabad Pakistan
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